We wore our Raya clothes to school. We brought some cookies and cakes. We studied in the morning. We started the celebration at 12.00 p.m. We ate with teachers and friends. We dispersed at 1.00 p.m. We were happy.
Questions:
1. What is the basic form for the above verbs in red?
wear, bring, study, start, eat, disperse, are
2. How can we make the story more enjoyable to be read?
by using connectors (e.g. then, after that, finally), adjectives (e.g. beautiful, shiny, yellow) and also adverbs (e.g. happily, also, approximately).
Example of a better writing:
Questions:
1. What is the basic form for the above verbs in red?
wear, bring, study, start, eat, disperse, are
2. How can we make the story more enjoyable to be read?
by using connectors (e.g. then, after that, finally), adjectives (e.g. beautiful, shiny, yellow) and also adverbs (e.g. happily, also, approximately).
Example of a better writing:
Today, we wore our beautiful, shiny, colourful Raya clothes to our school. We also brought with us some delicious cookies and cakes. As usual, we studied attentively in the morning. We only started the celebration at 12.00 p.m. Then, we ate heartily together with our teachers and also friends. Finally, after enjoying ourselves, we dispersed at approximately 1.00 p.m. We were very happy.
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